Dream job "first draft"

     Everyone has his own dream job.One should decide what he wants to be teacher,doctor whatever he wants.One should do his best to achieve his goal in life.If someone wants to be a doctor ,he must do all his homework to be a doctor.

      When I was young,if someone asks me what you want to be in the future,I say that I want to be a good teacher.For this goal,iwant to prepare myselfto be a teacher that I used to study my lessons carefully,read books about how to be a good teacher and take courses in order to improve my teaching skills.So I entered the faculty of education and now I am in the fourth year of the faculty of education,English department.

      If you want to be a good thing in the future,there must be a good example you follow.My father is an English teacher.He has a good and serious character.I want to be a teacher like my father because he is a perfect example in my life.I want to complete my father`s way and after six months I will be a teacher.

      Finally,everyone must put his goal in front of his eyes to do what is possible to achieve his goal.We can have a good example in our life who can influence us. 

Dream job (outline)

*Outline

        Everyone has his own dream job for the future.

       To be a thing in the future,you must do your best.

        Everyone has a good example who can follow in his life.

        You should decide your goals in your life

The educational system in Egypt "final draft"

Education is very important for any country.Education helps us achieve our progress and development.there are some arguments around the egyptian educational system.

Some people see that the educational system in Egypt is a good system ,but the others see that this system must be modified.

        

 People ,who think that the educational system in Egypt is a good system,believe that it can achieve its goals and objects and get the progress of Egypt.They see that this educational system is well organized as it is divided into three satges:the primary stage,the secondary stage and the post secondary stage.Education in Egypt is free for all people but there is what we call the special education which is concerned to some people with high standard of living.The number of students increase and this is a sign of a very good educational system in Egypt.Some foreign students come to Egypt to educate,so education in Egypt is well organized.

  

  The others say that educational system in Egypt must be improved.They believe that there is a total incabacity  in education and the educational level of students is bad in all the educational stages.These stages have to be well organized because they depend on each other.If there is something wrong in any of the stages,other stages will have the same wrong .Curriculums and exams are not appropriate for the skills and abilities of students.There are many students who pass exams by luck and now they are in university.So the educational system in Egypt needs to be improved.

   

  From my point of view, education is the window from which we can see the whole world.Education is good in Egypt ,but it needs to be developed in some aspects.  Education should be suitable for the age of students because each stage has its own characteristics.

the educational system in Egypt "first draft"

Education is very important for any country.Education helps us achieve our progress and development.there are some arguments around the egyptian educational system.

Some people see that the educational system in Egypt is a good system ,but the others see that this system must be modified.

        

 People ,who think that the educational system in Egypt is a good system,believe that it can achieve its goals and objects and get the progress of Egypt.They see that this educational system is well organized as it is divided into three satges:the primary stage,the secondary stage and the post secondary stage.Education in Egypt is free for all people but there is what we call the special education which is concerned to some people with high standard of living.The number of students increase and this is a sign of a very good educational system in Egypt.Some foreign students come to Egypt to educate,so education in Egypt is well organized.

  

  The others say that educational system in Egypt must be improved.They believe that there is a total incabacity  in education and the educational level of students is bad in all the educational stages.These stages have to be well organized because they depend on each other.If there is something wrong in any of the stages,other stages will have the same wrong .Curriculums and exams are not appropriate for the skills and abilities of students.There are many students who pass exams by luck and now they are in university.So the educational system in Egypt needs to be improved.

   

  From my point of view, education is the window from which we can see the whole world.Education is good in Egypt ,but it needs to be developed in some aspects.  Education should be suitable for the age of students because each stage has its own characteristics. 

Educational system in Egypt (outline)

1. The importance of education.
2. The educational system in Egypt.
3. People`s points of view about education in Egypt.
4. Educational system in Egypt is a good system.
5. Educational system in Egypt must be modified.
6. Sages of education in Egypt.

Woman`s work (final draft)

Woman`s work (final draft)

                                                             Woman`s Work
    Woman is the second half of society. Without woman there is no society so,we must give her right to work.Woman`s work is a very argumentative topic that attracts the attention of people.Some people say that woman can work and others say that woman can not work.From my point of view that woman can work if her abilities enable her to work.
     Some people say that woman has the right to work and achieve her goals in the practical life. Woman wants to work in order to develope herself.She needs to buy everything she wants.She likes to raise her social position in society. She prefares to help her children live in a high standard of living.She wants to help her husband financialy.
     There are some old beliefs that woman has no weight in society and man is the dominant member in society.Some people think that woman is created only to take care of her family.They think that woman does not have the right to work.Woman only must take care of her husband and her children.
     In fact,I think that woman plays a supplementary role in society.Woman and man should co-operate with each other to improve their life.Man should respect his wife and gives her right to work and to achieve her success in her life.Moreover,woman should respect her husband and gives him all his rights.woman can work and in the same time she should take care of her family.
     finally,man and woman are two faces of one coin so,they must co-operate with each other to develope their life.Woman must take her right to work if she can work.Woman must know her duties and her rights.

Woman`s work (first draft)

                                                             Woman`s Work
    Woman is the second half of society. Without woman there is no society so,we must give her right to work.Woman`s work is a very argumentative topic that attracts the attention of people.Some people say that woman can work and others say that woman can not work.From my point of view that woman can work if her abilities enable her to work.
     Some people say that woman has the right to work and achieve her goals in the practical life. Woman wants to work in order to develope herself.She wants to buy everything she wants.She wants to raise her social position in society. She wants to help her children live in a high standard of living.She wants to help her husband financialy.
     There are some old beliefs that woman has no weight in society and man is the dominant member in society.Some people think that woman is created only to take care of her family.They think that woman does not have the right to work.Woman only must take care of her husband and her children.
     In fact,I think that woman plays a supplementary role in society.Woman and man should co-operate with each other to improve their life.Man should respect his wife and gives her right to work and to achieve her success in her life.Moreover,woman should respect her husband and gives him all his rights.woman can work and in the same time she should take care of her family.
     finally,man and woman are two faces of one coin so,they must co-operate with each other to develope their life.Woman must take her right to work if she can work.Woman must know her duties and her rights.

Outline(woman`s work

                                                      woman`s work

1. woman`s work is argumentative topic.
2. The opinions of people about woman`s work.
3. Woman is the second half of society.
4. Woman`s rights and duties.
5. Woman plays a supplementary role with man.

Air pollution (final draft)

Air pollution (final draft)

                                                          Air pollution
   Nowadays Pollution is very serious and harmful  in Egypt. We can see all  kinds of pollution such as noise pollution ,water pollution ,and the most dangerous one is the air pollution. Air pollution has bad causes and effects that affect  us and we try to control this air pollution.
     Air pollution is a change in the physical, chemical and biological characteristics of air that causes adverse effects on humans and other organisms. Air pollution results from a variety of causes,not all of which are within human control. On the one hand,with modernization and progress,air has become more and more polluted over the years. Industries ,vehicles and factories release smoke that affect us.Cars in streets release harmful smoke and make the air polluted.there are other sources that make the air polluted such as cement,steel,refineries,petro-chemicals and mines.Moreover,dust storms in desert areas and smoke from forest fires and the grass fires contribute to chemical and particulate pollution of the air.
     As air pollution has bad causes,it has bad effects.There is an increase in the death rates resulting from various diseases caused by air pollution,varying from breathing problems to lung cancer.People with health problems such as heart and lung diseases may also suffer more and more when the air is polluted.It has caused thinning of the protective ozone layer of the atmosphere which is leading to climate change.
     Every problem has its solution so, we can control air pollution in Egypt by raising the awareness of people to protect their environment from pollution.the government must build industrial factories in remote areas.we can use smaller electric vehicles,bikes or public transportation.we can use alternative fuels and energy sources.we can decrease smoke that is released from factories by using a filter-cleaning system.
     as we saw that air pollution is very dangerous problem that faces every one all over the world so, we should stand shoulder to shoulder for the sake of our health,environment and against air pollution

Air pollution (first draft)

                                                          Air pollution
     Pollution is very serious and harmful nowdays in Egypt. We can see all the kinds of pollution such as noise pollution ,water pollution ,and the most dangerous one is the air pollution. Air pollution has bad causes and effects that affect on us and we try to control this air pollution.
     Air pollution is a change in the physical, chemical and biological characteristics of air that causes adverse effects on humans and other organisms. Air pollution results from a variety of causes,not all of which are within human control. On the one hand,with modernization and progress,air has become more and more polluted over the years. Industries vehicles and factories release smoke that affects on us.Cars in streets release harmful smoke and make the air polluted.there are some things that make the air polluted such as cement,steel,refineries,petro-chemicals and mines.On the other hand,dust storms in desert areas and smoke from forest fires and the grass fires contribute to chemical and particulate pollution of the air.
     As the air pollution has bad causes,it has bad effects.There is an increase in the death rates resulting from various diseases caused by air pollution,varying from breathing problems to lung cancer.People with health problems such as heart and lung diseases may also suffer more and more when the air is polluted.It has caused thinning of the protective ozone layer of the atmosphere which is leading to climate change.
     Every problem has its solution,sowe can control air pollution in Egypt by rising the awareness of people to protect their environment from pollution.the government must build the industrial factories in remote areas.we can use smaller electric vehicles,bikes or public transportation.we can use alternative fuels and energy sources.we can decrease smoke that is released from factories by using a filter-cleaning system.
     as we saw that air pollution is very dangerous problem that faces every one all over the world.So we should stand shoulder to shoulder for the sake of our health,environment and against the air pollution.

outline (pollution)

1. what is pollution ?
2. what are the kinds of pollution ?
3. what is the air pollution ?
4. what are the causes of air pollution?
5. what are the effects of air pollution ?
6. How can we control air pollution ?

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