Woman`s work (final draft)
Woman`s Work
Woman is the second half of society. Without woman there is no society so,we must give her right to work.Woman`s work is a very argumentative topic that attracts the attention of people.Some people say that woman can work and others say that woman can not work.From my point of view that woman can work if her abilities enable her to work.
Some people say that woman has the right to work and achieve her goals in the practical life. Woman wants to work in order to develope herself.She needs to buy everything she wants.She likes to raise her social position in society. She prefares to help her children live in a high standard of living.She wants to help her husband financialy.
There are some old beliefs that woman has no weight in society and man is the dominant member in society.Some people think that woman is created only to take care of her family.They think that woman does not have the right to work.Woman only must take care of her husband and her children.
In fact,I think that woman plays a supplementary role in society.Woman and man should co-operate with each other to improve their life.Man should respect his wife and gives her right to work and to achieve her success in her life.Moreover,woman should respect her husband and gives him all his rights.woman can work and in the same time she should take care of her family.
finally,man and woman are two faces of one coin so,they must co-operate with each other to develope their life.Woman must take her right to work if she can work.Woman must know her duties and her rights.
Woman is the second half of society. Without woman there is no society so,we must give her right to work.Woman`s work is a very argumentative topic that attracts the attention of people.Some people say that woman can work and others say that woman can not work.From my point of view that woman can work if her abilities enable her to work.
Some people say that woman has the right to work and achieve her goals in the practical life. Woman wants to work in order to develope herself.She needs to buy everything she wants.She likes to raise her social position in society. She prefares to help her children live in a high standard of living.She wants to help her husband financialy.
There are some old beliefs that woman has no weight in society and man is the dominant member in society.Some people think that woman is created only to take care of her family.They think that woman does not have the right to work.Woman only must take care of her husband and her children.
In fact,I think that woman plays a supplementary role in society.Woman and man should co-operate with each other to improve their life.Man should respect his wife and gives her right to work and to achieve her success in her life.Moreover,woman should respect her husband and gives him all his rights.woman can work and in the same time she should take care of her family.
finally,man and woman are two faces of one coin so,they must co-operate with each other to develope their life.Woman must take her right to work if she can work.Woman must know her duties and her rights.
your essay is well organized.your ideas are clear.
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