The educational system in Egypt "final draft"

Education is very important for any country.Education helps us achieve our progress and development.there are some arguments around the egyptian educational system.

Some people see that the educational system in Egypt is a good system ,but the others see that this system must be modified.

        

 People ,who think that the educational system in Egypt is a good system,believe that it can achieve its goals and objects and get the progress of Egypt.They see that this educational system is well organized as it is divided into three satges:the primary stage,the secondary stage and the post secondary stage.Education in Egypt is free for all people but there is what we call the special education which is concerned to some people with high standard of living.The number of students increase and this is a sign of a very good educational system in Egypt.Some foreign students come to Egypt to educate,so education in Egypt is well organized.

  

  The others say that educational system in Egypt must be improved.They believe that there is a total incabacity  in education and the educational level of students is bad in all the educational stages.These stages have to be well organized because they depend on each other.If there is something wrong in any of the stages,other stages will have the same wrong .Curriculums and exams are not appropriate for the skills and abilities of students.There are many students who pass exams by luck and now they are in university.So the educational system in Egypt needs to be improved.

   

  From my point of view, education is the window from which we can see the whole world.Education is good in Egypt ,but it needs to be developed in some aspects.  Education should be suitable for the age of students because each stage has its own characteristics.

the educational system in Egypt "first draft"

Education is very important for any country.Education helps us achieve our progress and development.there are some arguments around the egyptian educational system.

Some people see that the educational system in Egypt is a good system ,but the others see that this system must be modified.

        

 People ,who think that the educational system in Egypt is a good system,believe that it can achieve its goals and objects and get the progress of Egypt.They see that this educational system is well organized as it is divided into three satges:the primary stage,the secondary stage and the post secondary stage.Education in Egypt is free for all people but there is what we call the special education which is concerned to some people with high standard of living.The number of students increase and this is a sign of a very good educational system in Egypt.Some foreign students come to Egypt to educate,so education in Egypt is well organized.

  

  The others say that educational system in Egypt must be improved.They believe that there is a total incabacity  in education and the educational level of students is bad in all the educational stages.These stages have to be well organized because they depend on each other.If there is something wrong in any of the stages,other stages will have the same wrong .Curriculums and exams are not appropriate for the skills and abilities of students.There are many students who pass exams by luck and now they are in university.So the educational system in Egypt needs to be improved.

   

  From my point of view, education is the window from which we can see the whole world.Education is good in Egypt ,but it needs to be developed in some aspects.  Education should be suitable for the age of students because each stage has its own characteristics. 

Educational system in Egypt (outline)

1. The importance of education.
2. The educational system in Egypt.
3. People`s points of view about education in Egypt.
4. Educational system in Egypt is a good system.
5. Educational system in Egypt must be modified.
6. Sages of education in Egypt.

Woman`s work (final draft)

Woman`s work (final draft)

                                                             Woman`s Work
    Woman is the second half of society. Without woman there is no society so,we must give her right to work.Woman`s work is a very argumentative topic that attracts the attention of people.Some people say that woman can work and others say that woman can not work.From my point of view that woman can work if her abilities enable her to work.
     Some people say that woman has the right to work and achieve her goals in the practical life. Woman wants to work in order to develope herself.She needs to buy everything she wants.She likes to raise her social position in society. She prefares to help her children live in a high standard of living.She wants to help her husband financialy.
     There are some old beliefs that woman has no weight in society and man is the dominant member in society.Some people think that woman is created only to take care of her family.They think that woman does not have the right to work.Woman only must take care of her husband and her children.
     In fact,I think that woman plays a supplementary role in society.Woman and man should co-operate with each other to improve their life.Man should respect his wife and gives her right to work and to achieve her success in her life.Moreover,woman should respect her husband and gives him all his rights.woman can work and in the same time she should take care of her family.
     finally,man and woman are two faces of one coin so,they must co-operate with each other to develope their life.Woman must take her right to work if she can work.Woman must know her duties and her rights.